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Do not shoot, little boy, at the squirrels and birds,
Do not shoot, little boy, from that slingshot of yours,
Do not shoot, little boy, find a different thrill,
Do not shoot, these are living things that you kill.
You hung out at the range, where they said you were great,
You shot lying or sitting or standing up straight,
You could hit any target completely at will,
And people exclaimed, "The kid has got skill!"

Do not shoot, little boy, do not shoot!
Do not shoot, little boy, do not shoot!

He signed up with the army, as he'd dreamed to since birth,
And was sent to a war-stricken spot of the earth,
But when he came home, he stopped shooting for good,
And stayed as far from the range as he could,
And when anyone spoke of his soldiering time,
He would drown his conscience in bottles of wine.
He'd remember that boy who had stood on his knees,
He'd remember that boy who'd been begging him, "Please,

Do not shoot, mister, please, do not shoot!
Do not shoot, mister, please, do not shoot!"
©2007-2009 ~YuriM
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Written 1 July 2005.

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:iconvampire-watermelon:
Wow, that's really good! Well done! I love the message in it, and the way you get it across with the repitition. It's really good! ^_^

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-> Downloading 'Life'.
--> Life 96% loaded.
---> Life 97% loaded.
----> Life 99% loaded.
-----> System error.
------> System failure.
-------> Download of 'Life' failed.
--------> You have no Life.
---------> Retry?
:iconkitastropher:
fantastic work Yuri.
reminds me slightly of a doctor seuss poem, which makes it a little disturbing, but i guess thats what war is

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K.
walk through a corner and around an archway. and you might find yourself in a place you've always been looking for.
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Ever heard of Quantum love? one can never prove it, but you know its there
:iconyurim:
Yes. "Sing-song" and "childish" are terms that have been used to describe this piece before. Thank you for reading.

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I write poetry. [link]
:iconyurim:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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I write poetry. [link]
:iconnyxnastasya:
An amazing piece! You convey ideas that many feel but few vocalize in a brilliant manner. Really remarkable!

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"Better than a thousand hollow words is one word that brings peace."
>Buddha<
:iconyurim:
Thanks.

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